Saturday, March 14, 2020

Take her freedom


A brother and a sister go to shopping. Roaming freely, happily. Sister is very happy as she has freedom of roaming with her brother. Brother just finished exams and is very happy. Slides rail of schools and runs to home.Sister and brother have another sister older than both of them.Brother is never self-confident and feels scared while in market with her sister, but he acts bravely so that she can enjoy. She is very bold and smart. They come across a home in somewhat isolated place, and she is ahead of him, enters a house where there are two cows and haystack, she is thirsty and drinks water from a tap nearby, brother tells her to come outside the house, but she does not listen, a man comes out(beard, red eyes, tall, muscular) and starts yelling at her for being there. She apologizes but said that she was thirsty, man is very mad, she is sorry, man starts pushing her out of his home and brother takes her out while apologizing and trying to stop him but unable due to his size. Sister gets angry and says she was just drinking water, there is no reason to act like that, it makes the man more angry and sister defends herself, man pushes her away and slaps her, sister slaps her back, brother is also trying to fight the man.
Man slapped her and punched the brother.
+Now, brother got up and kicked his guts, and he went down as he was trying to rape her. She got away and ran as said commanded by her brother. Man is down, brother has a knife(in his socks) and takes it out and stabs the man several times(eyes, chest, stomach, genitals cut). Sister ran to a bus stand and called police for help.+
+ is a dream that brother had after being knocked out, actually it didn’t happen. What happened is below-Brother got knocked out by man’s punch(was unconscious) and man took her by hair inside home saying “come I’ll show you my home”. Home is almost empty, except some antiques, paintings. She had been bruised by falling on road after being pushed over by the man. Now, he notices that she is wearing a saree, sees her features and holds her and takes her out by hair (she is screaming and crying).Takes her out and knocks her unconscious. She is blank.He removes her clothing and bends her on a beam(3-4 ft high) and starts raping her vigorously. When she was unconscious, she felt the impacts of his genitals inside her. She could see her brother unconscious on the ground and was sobbing, she lifted a stick and sand, threw sand at him and with stick she hit his genitals, they started bleeding, he grabbed her and said “I’ll take away your bravery and beauty with your soul”.He grabbed her, takes her inside and burns her, first her hands then legs and then her face, he left no skin on her. He doesn’t allow her to die, just burnt real bad.She screamed and then the brother wakes up. He sees through the door what he has done to his sister and starts running and crying for help, reaches the bus stop and calls police, they arrive after sometime.Brother goes around home and police forward. He is with a cop, police asks the man to come out of home, he steps out and negotiated her life for his freedom.Brother and cop step and cop shoots guy on legs, sister runs to her brother, who puts his clothes on her. She is shocked, ruined, crying.Man is in custody.
What does the brother feel after all this?What does society represent?Was man a criminal in hiding?Was man impotent?What is the way/process of burning?Entrance of cops?Scene of brother seeing sister through door?Where did they live?


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